Luis’ Comments

I enjoy watching people; it’s one of the best ways I find things out about people. 

Ok dude I went over read it and the only thing that I found wrong in your paragraph was this sentence. I enjoy watching people; it’s one of the best ways I find things out about people.  Before this you made it sound like if you enjoy what the people were watching. Also instead of “people” you might want to try changing it for another word for example classmates or anything else.